tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3369390564947947263.post273441562647089066..comments2023-12-28T07:38:26.463-08:00Comments on Guerrilla Warfare For Writers: Some Editorial Scoldingschrishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18102098535430812058noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3369390564947947263.post-12865547597608038572013-11-22T13:57:20.158-08:002013-11-22T13:57:20.158-08:00LOL Very true! :) That is pretty apt.LOL Very true! :) That is pretty apt.Scarlett Dawnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02576976861510169955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3369390564947947263.post-47776579848961081322013-11-22T13:51:31.826-08:002013-11-22T13:51:31.826-08:00Thanks, Scarlett. I just had a writer comment from...Thanks, Scarlett. I just had a writer comment from another group and called such repetition "Sledghammering", which I thought was an apt and funny way to describe the habit. Nothing like pounding the message home, wot?chrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18102098535430812058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3369390564947947263.post-56265418994378888312013-11-22T13:43:40.743-08:002013-11-22T13:43:40.743-08:00IMHO, I kind of like that last sentence. It gives ...IMHO, I kind of like that last sentence. It gives your character 'voice', instead of just the actions she was going through. With that last sentence she came off as a smartass. I enjoyed reading the humor. (that certain spark, I agree with you on - not needed)Scarlett Dawnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02576976861510169955noreply@blogger.com